I swear to god it may not seem like it, but you have have been blessed to try and redo your godawful first attempt, at the precipice of the "new" CR. The CR that doesn't want to eat your babies, no matter how delicious, and your second try while better than the first attempt, is still pretty paltry. Of course your first intro could've been better done by a 2 yr old, understandably lacking the ability to read and or write, which also explains their inability to type. This doesn't apply to you.
This may sound awfully mean of me, but I have not yet repped you, and may just change my neutral position for money, or for sexual favors from an attractive female(waiting for clever edit) you may know. Of course you could bypass the whole thing by giving a little more info, and maybe, just maybe throwing a pic of your ride, past ride, GF, or something funny. By the way, I happen to be a fan of 4banger imports, so what import do you want ? Ho do you plan on making it as rice as possible (I am most interested in this) ? Also, would you like to do a 20 roll for a delicious baby ?