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My first short movie: plz watch


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Okay while the bike is hibernating for winter what should i do with the obsessive compulsiveness to use a camera...well why not make a short movie. Someday i hope i can make one real one... but for now small home movies itself are good.

So while me and some friends where hanging out i just asked them to do some stuff to fit into this story i had, The restriction are non professional actors, restricted number of people and of course the location, situation etc.

Anyways the product is a random simple movie, filmed under 2 hours edited under another 2. length of close to 2 minutes. dont stop when credits roll. Hopefully at least few of you like it. As always comments and rating would help a lot. Two more parts to come.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yTBRX-xs32M

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I thought it was gonna go pron any minute. :lol: Good angles and lighting job in a dark garage like that. Still think it was a good plot line for porn, what with her doing the head toss over and over. Bow-chicka-bow, walka,walka...... :)

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Terrrific job, Doc! I thought the sound quality was excellent and gave the scenes added depth a lot of shorts don't have. And like buildit I liked the angles you shot at. I'm curious as to what camera you shot this with? The depth on some of those shots was great! Kudos!

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Pretty awesome vid, doc! Good focus effects which add to the drama and overall good timing and shots. One thing that bothers me though is that the window is 1/3 up when she gets in the car and then suddenly all the way down when she goes to roll it up??? Also, when do you have time for all this filming as a resident :)?

Looking forward to more shorts from you in the future, and hopefully some more rides next summer!

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Thx for the comment guys,

@ Speedy: i feel so sad every time i look at those footage where i missed all the good parts because of nooby camera placement .. i just dont feel like editing up the junk part after missing out on the best parts :(

I am getting prepared for next years ride which we can make twice awesome as this year, then the video i swear i am gonna put 110 % in it by controlling my ADHD

@ Fizzer: haha ur right, when i did the window wind up from all the way down it gave me more time to bring in that effect And regarding the time, my academic performance has gone down the drain this year hahah

@jerry hahaha will call you soon

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Cool film. I did notice a blooper/mistake though :). I love catching tv/movie

mistakes, with a dvr and rewind it's easy to go back and forth to verify what

you thought you saw wrong.

When she comes up to her car, her window is partially up or down, which ever

way you look at it. Then at about 2:06 the window is completely down and

she starts to roll it up. :D

Edit: aww, I didn't see that someone else noticed it too, thats what I get

for posting before reading the whole thread lol.

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