Janszen Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Just putting it out there to see if people like it. http://youtube.com/watch?v=FRy2OroC8Fc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ODoyle Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 I like it, but it was a little long for me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Not bad, but i can't read the titles too well. Also a tad long. Good shots/clips, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
V8 Beast Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Wife and I liked it a lot. Nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suffocateXfaster1647545505 Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Only gripe was the length, but the footage was done very nicely. Well put together mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rally Pat Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Nothing that hasn't been said already Josh: Well put together, little long, and the titles get kind of hard to read. Nice job though, mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neonkiller Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Song goes well with the footage however if I can give some pointers. Instead of freezing a frame and pannig out use real footage of it. The movemenat of the camera following the car the seing a picture and digitally panning out of it to see the whole car made it weird it didnt fit together however its a very good start its a sweet vid. Was the object to create a commercial?.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex L. Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 I liked the video. I agree that it was a little long, and I agree with neonkiller about that still, but overall, it was a nice production. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drewhop Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Good Commercial. The only thing i didnt like was the JDM part thought it was kinda cheesy but overall it actually fit well with the Toyota commercials of the late 80s-90's Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Janszen Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Yea I know it was kinda long but in class we had to give a 10 minute presentation so i stretched it out a little, as for the titles all I have to say is you tube.. I also hoping to use a HD video camera but none was available so I just made it with what I had. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clifford Automotive Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 I liked it. I would have used Wheels instead of Rims and Sport without the S on Exhaust. Over all I'd still give you an A, I thought it was well put together. I remember when I had to do that in a media arts class. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Janszen Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Thanks for all of the good comments guys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ramsey Posted May 29, 2008 Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Not bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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