Hobs it all depend on what "your" looking for. As I discovered on OR my screen here at the shop is way off...See "Stillman" in pics and vids.
It looks like you shot pretty shallow 20-30mm, good Depth of Field. Your focus its right on.
Im sure other will step in before I get home to look again.
Oh .NEF and .RAW files are the same thing. Nikon just feels the need to be different.